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Linked to the Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #75, where Magical Mystical Teacher’s hokku is our inspiration.  Our task is to add two lines in approximately 7/7 for tan renga.

first yellow blossom
sprouting from a slender branch—
Buddha bows his head

© Magical Mystical Teacher

Here is my attempt:

9 1 2014 yellow flower 2

first yellow blossom
sprouting from a slender branch—
Buddha bows his head                                  (MMT)

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even the chickadee’s hushed
on this petal-soft morning                          (Paloma)

9 1 2014 yellow flower original

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