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Linked to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #81, where our challenge was to take this haiku by Yozakura and add two lines in approximately 7/7.  Here is the haiku:

feeling alone
lost in the woods around Edo –
just the autumn wind

Yozakura

oak leaf

Here is our host’s tan renga:

feeling alone
in the woods around Edo –
just the autumn wind                    (Yozakura)

colorful leaves dancing
through the abandoned city       (Chèvrefeuille)

Alphonse Mucha.  Novem. WikiArt.

And here is my own:

feeling alone
in the woods around Edo –
just the autumn wind                      (Yozakura)

tying my hair in knots
with another rebellion                    (Paloma)

Alphonse Mucha.  Novem. WikiArt. (Colorized)

Alphonse Mucha. Novem. WikiArt. (Colorized)

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