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   breaking white –
an orange beak
   over bare branches –
a cardinal sings spring
into the pussy willow

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Carpe Diem
Pussy Willows

I like it as a mysterious haiku.
What do you think?

   breaking white –
an orange beak
    over bare branches   

 

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28 thoughts on “breaking white

    • Thanks Blake – I loved the mystery too, but wondered if it was too vague to survive without knowing the prompt. But … even still…that orange and white was intriguing

      Glad you liked it

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