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caledonia creek waterfall snow footprints

heavy ice
hides the creek from view –  
the trickle i hear
is a roar to the fox
that pads through the night

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Carpe Diem
Hearing

Ten Tanka Techniques
#9 – Exquisite Detail

I meant this as a metaphor for “inability to meditate” but realize it might be a bit of a stretch … “meditation” is another prompt at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.

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